Friday, 11 December 2015

Formative blog feedback - Miss Hunter


Mose, the blog posts that you have published are looking very good. Well done.



So far:



WWW: Your ideas are thorough, detailed and thoughtful. You understand the conventions of a magazine and I can see that you have used them in the preliminary task.



EBI: Always give full effort, so you are able to keep pace with the rest of the class and you aren't rushed when completing the final aspects of your blog.



Next steps:

  • Publish your contents page.
  • Language analysis
  • Editor's letter analysis
  • Case study

Work hard so that you are able to catch up. Aim to complete your case study in one week's time.

Friday, 18 September 2015

School Magazine

Possible titlesHampstead Weekly
                                     Late for School
                                               Detention  
                                                       The Student
                                                               
                                                             
Possible images : Students in uniform on a wall side by side
                                         Students walking side by side 
                                                            Crowds of students in the corridors
                                                                      
Possible coverlines and articles : Gossip Columns
                                                              Talent Columns - e.g, poetry, art, photography

                                                                        Clubs - e.g. Swimming, choir
                                                                                Shows and Up Coming Events
                                                                                        Educational Games and Quizzes
Possible Cover Sketch :